I asked Simon to apply the "page 69 test" to In the Dark. Here is what he reported:
Page 69 of In the Dark is actually a sidetrack from the main narrative. Investigators are attempting to piece together the final hours in the life of Evelyn Hamilton, a woman found strangled inMany thanks to Simon for the input.a London air-raid shelter in February 1942. Their inquiries take them all over the city, and they question William Parker, a porter at the Baker Street Station, who helped Evelyn with her luggage shortly after her arrival in the city.
Naturally, In the Dark’s wartime setting provides ample opportunities to exploit the atmosphere of 1940s London. In questioning Porter, Scotland Yard detectives learned he and his wife had evacuated their children the three years prior to avoid the onslaught of German bombs. This detail gave me another opportunity to explore one of many hardships endured by many Londoners during World War II and resulted in the following passage:
Parker glanced up at the sky and, out of habit, strained his ears for the drone of approaching bombers. Married, he had a son and a daughter. He and his wife had evacuated the children to Cornwall at the start of the war. It was a torment for parent and child — and one suffered by thousands of families as they packed their children off to the homes of strangers, away from the nightmare of screaming sirens and a burning city. In some strange way, Parker considered he and his wife to be lucky. Some children had been whisked across the oceans to America, Canada, Australia and South Africa. The voyage to distant shores was a hazardous endeavor, and some ships fell prey to roaming packs of U-boats. The Parkers had not been burdened by such a worry. They had put their children on a train bound for the English countryside. Now, they were waiting for the bombs to stop falling and for their children to return home. With these thoughts weighing on his mind, he walked back down the stairs and took up his position on the platform.
I thought it made for a nice aside, which adds another layer of depth to the book’s dark atmosphere.
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